初一英语介绍文
Hello everybody. first I am a girm. My name is Cao Xueer, and my english name is Sellys. I am not very tall. I have short hair and big eyes. I am an active and a funny gir. I like reading books. I read books everyday. And I like English very much, because Enlgish is very interesting and very important…… last， I hope we can be good friends. thanks！ 帮我看一下有没有问题，或者是更好的建议。
Hello everybody. I am a girl.(如果是口头介绍，这句去掉） My name is Cao Xue'er and my English name is Sellys. I am not very tall. I have short hair and big eyes. I am an active and funny girl. I like reading books. I read books everyday. And I like English very much, because Enlgish is very interesting and important…… I hope we can be good friends. Thanks！
Hello, everybody. Let me introduce myself. I am a girl. My name is Cao Xueer, and my english name is Sellys. I am not very tall. I have short hair and big eyes. I am an active girl with humours. I like reading. I read everyday. And I like English very much, because Enlgish is very interesting and important…… I hope we can be good friends. Thanks！
如此简单
1。first I am a girm. 应该是girl。 2。I am an active and a funny gir. 改为I am an active girl full of humour. 3.because Enlgish is very interesting and very important…… 去掉第二个very。 4。记得句首单词首字母大写。
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