七年级上册英语复习讲义
一、写作决窍
总体把握,要点齐全;人称时态,逻辑清楚;
关键词汇,动词第一;组词成句,结构完整;
组句成文,连词增色;此路不通,绕道迂回;
字迹工整,留好印象;从句适量,高分有望。
二、写作步骤
1。 认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息,告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。
2。 确定文体和时态。确定文体后,根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。
3。 写完要点,但不随意发挥。
4。 先草稿,后抄写。
三、习作点评
(14分)
Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it。 Tell the magazine readers。
·What exactly your hobby is;
·When and how you became interested in this hobby;
·Why you enjoy your hobby;
·About your hopes and plans for the future。
写作要求:
1。 根据所提供的内容,适当拓展想象空间,灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。
2。 条理清楚,语句通顺,书写清晰、规范。
3。 词数60-80。
My hobby is read books①。When I was seven years became interested in reading like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in can learn a lot of knowledge from books。 Books also② can teach me how to be a good even can solve many problems for will read more good books to improve myself。
①改为reading books,动词作表语时应该用动名词。
②also的位置应放在can之后。
档次9-11分。
①要点不全,漏掉最后一个要点。
②句子基本无误,能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅,句子与句子之间过渡不自然,给读者感觉在回答上述问题。
③有少量错误。
My hobby is books is very I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story went to bed every stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t I began to read books by by little I became interested in can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful the same time I can improve my want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true。
①开门见山、点题。
②真情流露,理由充分。
③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当,使文章过渡自然、
④巧妙使用句型以表决心。
:档次13-14分。
①清楚表达写作目的,要点齐全。
②语言表达灵活多样,字里行间流露出真情实感,文章有感染力。
③恰当使用连词和从句,语言流畅,且无错误,是一篇高质量的作文。
①文体:记叙文。
②要点:what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future。
③时态:一般现在时,一般过去时,一般将来时的自然变化。
内容具有开放性,但它也是“控制性”的写作试题,因此不能随意发挥,要善于抓信息,写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作,一是因为他们选材相同,二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that,so,little by little,when,so that等,恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to,became interested in,come true……等,使内容丰富,读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会,只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评,同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。