帮忙看一下这里有那些错误,怎么改好一点.顺便说一下错误的原因!谢谢!
Onday,Iwenthomeforschool.Ontheway, omenwalkinfrontofme.Isawtwomenarerobofherbagisridingtheetwomenridingnearthewomanthepaceisslowdownandrobofherewomanshout:"stopandrobber,stopandrobber."buttherobberalreadyawayfast.Icouldn'tbelieveitwillinfilmshowing,sinceseenamongreality.
'One'（这处是打错了吧~） day,I went home for school。 On the way,I saw a robbery。 'A'（应该也是打错了，大写） women walk in front of me。 I saw two men 'were'（通篇为描述一个故事，时态保持一致，一般过去时） 'robbing'（be doing结构） of her bag （去掉is。
"riding the motorcycle"与"robbing of her bag"两动作同时进行，前者作后者的伴随状语） riding the motorcycle。 The two men 'were'（句中缺少系动词）riding near the woman。
The pace "slowed"（没有be do结构） down and 'robbed' of her bag。 The woman shout,（标点应是"，"而不是"："）"stop and robber,stop and robber。
"（I don't know the meaning of this sentence。Is that okey?）But the robber had been away fast already。 I couldn't believe it will in film showing,since seen among reality。
（What would you like to say?） P。S:Is it you composition?。
One(on) day,I went home after(for) school。On the way,I saw a robbery。A(a) women walk in front of me。I saw two men were(are) robbing(rob) of her bag (is) riding a(the) motorcycle。
The(the) two men rided(riding) near the woman and(the pace is) slow down the pace and robbed(rob) of her bag。The (the) woman shouted(shout),(:)"help! help!(stop and robber,stop and robber。
)" but the robber had been(already) away fastly(fast)。 I just met it in film and I couldn't believe it be true until I saw the rob。
(in film showing,since seen among reality。) 。
On day,I went home for school改为：One day,I left home for school。 On the way,I saw a robbery。无错误 a women walk in front of me。
改为：A woman was walking in front of me。 I saw two men are rob of her bag is riding the motorcycle。改为：Two man rode a motorbike very slowly to the woman。
the two men riding near the woman the pace is slow down and rob of her bag。改为:They robbed of her bag。 the woman shout改为：The woman shouted :"stop and robber,stop and robber。
"改为：Stop the robbers。 but the robber already away fast。改为:But the robbers rode away very quickly。 I couldn't believe it will in film showing,since seen among reality。
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