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I heard that a gril lose her love and not good mood at all day and all night.
i was chated with her, she siad to me that sometime love was pay out and not turn back anything.
I agress with her say.
 what kind of her.
Now I hosp that as soon as turn good mood to her .
 我听说有个女孩失恋了,成天的没有好心情。
和他聊天,她说爱有时候需要付出不需要有回报,
我同意她的说法。
好善良的人呀。
我希望她能尽快恢复好的心情。
 

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  • 2007-05-28 11:42:10
      几天不见,英语有进步啊!
    I heard that a gril lose her love and not good mood at all day and all night。 
    稍作修改:I heard that a gril "lost" her love and "was not in "good mood "all day and night。
      " i was chated with her, she siad to me that sometime love was pay out and not turn back anything。 稍作修改:i "chatted " with her, she siad to me that sometime love was "paying" out and not "turning" back anything。
       I agress with her say。 稍作修改:I "agree" with "what she said。" what kind of her。 稍作修改:what kind person she is。 /how kind she is。
       这里可能用 nice 好一点,how nice she is。 Now I hosp that as soon as turn good mood to her 。 稍作修改:Now I "hope" that she will cheer up again soon。
       。

    j***

    2007-05-28 11:42:10

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    2007-05-28 11:53:38
  • I heard a girl broke up with her boyfriend. She was not in a good mood the whole day.
    I talked with that girl, and she told me that sometimes love does not pay back as you wish.
    I agreed with her.
    How kind she is!
    I wish her to be happy again as soon as possible.

    朵***

    2007-05-28 11:53:38

  • 2007-05-28 11:52:35
  •   我听说有个女孩失恋了,成天的没有好心情。 
    I heard had a girl to be lovelorn, have no mode all the day。 
    和他聊天,她说爱有时候需要付出不需要有回报,
    while I chat with her ,she said that sometime love may only need to “give” not  “take “ hence never desire any reward from someone if you 
    我同意她的说法。
       I agreed with what her said。 好善良的人呀。 What a kindhearted girl!! 我希望她能尽快恢复好的心情。 I hope she can resume her good feeling as soon as possible 。
      

    2007-05-28 11:52:35

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