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1.The English Corner in Zhongshan Park is the place where------
people go to practise their spoken English there.Every Sunday----
afternoon they gather around,talk to each other in English.-----
Among them have students,teachers,doctors,and so on.-----
I first  went to an English Corner when I was in Junior-----
Grade Two.I went there every Sunday and chat with some-----
people in English.In the past three years I have never absent.-----
I'm sure I've made some progress in my listening or speaking.----
And we have made many friends there.The English Corner is----
a really good place. I hope many friends will join us.----
  希望大家能把它分析具体点,能有适当的翻译哦,谢谢了.

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  • 2007-02-12 17:09:24
      我按空给你标上号了阿   
    1。is the place 改成is a place 因为不止一个英语角,之前也没有提过 所以不用特指
    2。去掉there 因为是定语从句,前面已经有了关系词where
    3。talk改为talking 否则多谓语 该后就变成了伴随状语
    4。
      have改为are have用法不对,改后变为倒装句 5。an 改为the 因为需要特指 6。chat改为chated 过去时态 7。absent前加been 因为basent是形容词 只能让其作表语 或者让其变为动词 8。or改为and 意思理解上,自己揣摸一下 而且这里用or不合适,因为不可能不知道自己什么进步了,自己还用不确定的语气 9。
      we改为i 因为之前没提过别人 10。many改为more 通过前面的描述,那个英语角办的比较出色已经有很多人了,所以作者只能是希望有更多的人来加入 遇题冷静,慢慢分析,你会发现答案就摆在你面前 加油,小伙子。

    a***

    2007-02-12 17:09:24

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    2007-02-12 17:03:51
  • 1.正确
    2.去掉there,它是多余的
    3.talking to each other 动词的现在分词形式做状语
    4.among them are students...
    5.将an改成the.因为是特指.那个英语角,不是一个英语角
    6.chat改成chatted,因为是过去的动作,所以要用过去式
    7.I have never been absent.是be absent的现在完成时
    8.my listening and speaking.根据句义看出是各方面都有提高
    9.we改成I.前文并没有说"我们"如何,而一直在说"我"如何
    10.many改成more."希望更多朋友加入我们",比"希望很多朋友加入我们"意思更贴切

    x***

    2007-02-12 17:03:51

  • 2007-02-12 16:57:37
  •   1。The English Corner in Zhongshan Park is the place where------
    people go to (加and)practise their spoken English there。Every Sunday----
    afternoon they gather around,talk to each other in English。
      ----- Among them have students,teachers,doctors,and so on。----- I first(改为firstly) went to an English Corner when I was in Junior----- Grade Two。
      I went there every Sunday and chat(改为chatted) with some----- people in English。In the past three years I have never absent(改为absented)。
      ----- I'm sure I've made some progress in my listening or(or改为and) speaking。---- And we have made many friends there。The English Corner is---- a really good place。
       I hope many friends will (去掉will)join us。----。

    1***

    2007-02-12 16:57:37

  • 2007-02-12 16:51:57
  • there去掉,where和there重复
    gather around 改为gather together,聚集
    There are students...among them.
    when I was a student in Junior...
    chat 应注意世态(查一下字典)
    I have never been absent 这里应该是完成时
    made friends with each other 交朋友 
    join us改为join in us 加入我们的行列
    

    D***

    2007-02-12 16:51:57

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