一位初三学生的英语作文，请大家来评评看
自由作文一篇，请大家来评评 Knowledge is around us I went out this afternoon. I didn’t have a exact purpose. I just wanted to have a look and learn something. I believe that knowledge is around us. Knowledge isn’t just the points in the books. It includes lots of things. What you know about the city may be knowledge. The abilities of using things can be knowledge, too. We are too busy studying at school. They know too little about our society. We don’t have enough time to get more information. We don’t have time to go out to see more and to explore more. Actually we are “the frog in the well”. We used to study all kinds of things and get a great success. But now we have the only way to learn.
还行， 不过应该还多用一些句型！有时要注意表达方式的地道化！不要为了刻意用一个词而不惜用一个语法出错的句子生拉硬扯上！你的作文总体能看出你很注意课外积累，很用功！希望你继续努力！
典型的中国式英语。还没学到用英语思维。但潜力大。可喜！
对于一个初三的学生，词汇量确实不小，有前途
优秀的初三学生写到这样水平并不奇怪。
比我好，我都大二了还不会写英语作文。
这是初三学生写的吗？
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