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Dec.10.2006
December.10th.2006,we are going to Tian jin Tian He Hospital to make a physical examination.We will meet at school gate at half past one in the afternoon.Shool has to pian buese sent we to get there.Ours take by NO.2Bus. 请在原文基础上更改，并注明理由。谢谢！
We went to Tian Jin Tian He hospital to have physical examination on December 10,2006.We met at the school front gate at 1:30 pm.We took a No.2 bus there.Half an hour later we got there. Then we began to have the examnation one by one.I am glad that there's nothing wrong with me but a little fat.So I must eat less fat food and take more exercise.
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Dec.10.2006
On December.10th.2006, we will go to Tian jin Tian He Hospital for a physical examination.We will meet at the school gate at half past one pm.We will take No. 2 bus and the school will pay for it.
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On December 10, 2006, we went to Tian jin Tian He Hospital to make a physical examination. We should be at the school front gate at 1.30 pm. Our school had to organise some NO.2 buses to sent us there. 最大的问题，你的时态都不对，去年发生的事情，怎能用将来时？你单词拼写有问题，有些东西是我猜的。顺便说依据，就这3句话，根本不是一篇作文。
注意 Dec.10.2006 December.10th.2006,我们正在去 Tian jin Tian 他医院制造一个身体检查。我们午后在一点半将会在学校见面门。Shool 有对被将我们派遣到的 pian buese 到那里。我们的根据号码拿2Bus
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