帮忙修改高中英文作文
Dear Editors, I am Lin Wenhua who is a middle school student. Recently, I have read a short message about river pollution in your newspapers. I want to share some opinions with you. As is known to all, the environment of hauihe becomes worse during the past few decades because of the pollution. Now it is even worse than we thought that a great deal fish in the river died. There is no time to delay and we must do something to protect the river against pollution, or it will do harm to not only the environment but also our human beings. I think, firstly, the industry and daily life sewage should be forbidden to take into the river. Secondly, we shouldn’t throw rubbish into it. Besides these, we also have lots of things to do such as arousing the environment awareness of residents. Above all, we must try out best to protect the river against pollution. Looking forward to receiving from you soon. Yours, Li Wenhua
1， Now it is even worse than we thought that a great deal fish in the river died。这里的so that 用的很好啊！但是我觉得把died换成are dying或have died更好一些。
2，our human beings还是用we human beings更好！ 3，be forbidden to take into the river。就算这里延用你的表达方式 take into ，也应该加上be哦~ 或者你用上面这位翻译的很流畅，但是水平明显不是高中的（汗。
。。） 就是有2个地方我有疑问： 1，not only it is harmful to the environment but also human beings。这里不用倒装吗？ 2，the industry waste and the sewage systems should not be allowed to discharge into the river。
这里the sewage systems 是discharge的主语，the industry waste是宾语吧？ pohwahong,请指教！ 还有，他的ougth拼错了哦```呵呵``手误手误``。
问：Do you think this sentence is right or not in grammar ?
答：we do not care for/about what we have , but we cry when it is lost . I‘d like to...详情>>
