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   Today is Thursday,it's January 31th,it's raining and wouding.I am very unhappy because of those former things .
  Since than,I will work harder in my English,and I hope I will be first place in English like math and physice.Go ahead! 
   I remember that I like paper because of another people.He like paper,so I like paper.If I will remember him all the life?I don't konw.

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  • 2008-01-31 18:58:06
      1。Today is Thursday,it's January 31th,it's raining and wouding。不能用“,”并列简单句,要用连词。改为Today is January 31th,Thursday,and it's raining and winding all day。
      你有一处拼写错误。 2。I am very unhappy because of those former things 。 没交代清什么是those former things 。 3。Since than,I will work harder in my English,and I hope I will be first place in English like math and physice。
       Since than是从那以后的意思,意义不对,改为From now on“从现在起” 4。I hope I will be first place in English like math and physice。少介词on,改为I hope I will be on the first place 单词拼写错误,physice改为physics。
       5。I remember that I like paper because of another people。根据下文 another people改为a person。 6。He like paper,so I like paper。
      主语为he,谓语改为likes。 7。If I will remember him all the life?I don't konw。 改为Wheather I can remember him all the life?I don't konw。
       总之,错误不少且全为简单句,句式欠丰富。

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    2008-01-31 18:58:06

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