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2012-01-23 17:30:15

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  1.Adolescents are lack of self-control1.把are和of去掉
    they easily addicted to something like TV加become
  3.It is too time consuming改成It consumes too much time.
  4.I watched it every night,逗号改成句号
  5.It turns out that my scores of final exam highly declined.去掉 highly,加上by a big margin

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