每天10分，帮我指导一下简单的英语日记。
毕业十几年了，现在才想到学外语，可是老师教的东西都扔得差不多了，每天学一点点，做一下总结，可是不知道有没有什么错误，请大家帮忙指正。
5月15日（呃，这个不会用英文说）
review lesson 3 and lesson udy lesson 5 and lesson 6.《NCE STUDY GUIDE》 lesson 5 and lesson 6 have been finished. But 《workbook》lesson 5 and lesson 6 haven`t been finished.
5月15日，复习了第三课和第四课，学习了第五课和第六课。《自学导读》中的第五课和第六课已经做完了，但是《练习册》的第五课和第六课还没有做。
5月17日
I recited the new word of lesson 9 and lesson 10 today. I am very sleepy when I inquired about the route to Yunnan in the night,so I go to bed early. I study a little time only today.
今天背会了第9课和第10课的单词。晚上查找了一下去云南的路线以后就很困了，所以很早就睡了，今天只学习了一会时间。
reviewlesson3andlessonudylesson5andlesson6.《NCESTUDYGUIDE》lesson5andlesson6havebeenfinished.But《workbook》lesson5andlesson6haven` view和study要用过分词。xxedsth.是,ihaveXXedsth.的简略形式。如果用一般形式,就是计划而非日记了。NCESTUDYGUIDE书名号去掉,汉语才有书名号,英语没有,一般用斜体,或者大写。建议加上所有格。havebeen该做was。but前面的句号改,。haventbeen改wasn't。recited改memorized。recite是背诵,memories是记住。am改was。go改went。最后一句改Today,Ihaveonlybeenstudyingforashortwhile。
May 15 Sunny
I reviewed lesson 3 and lesson 4 and learned lesson 5 and lesson 6。
I have done the homework of lesson 5 and lesson 6 in NCE STUDY GUIDE。 But I haven`t finished lesson 5 and lesson 6 in workbook。
May 17 Sunny
Today I remembered the new word of lesson 9 and lesson 10 。
Tonight I was very tired after I finded the route to Yunnan。So I went to bed very early。That is why today I only spended a little time on my study。
很明显的中国习惯的英语，建议lz多去读读英文报纸，培养感觉，英语有太多的语法，系统学习的也不可能记全，我以前问过那些英语好的他们怎么会那么好，都说是有语感，学英语多读才使王道，最好有电子词典之类，遇到生词先猜，再查，不必刻意记，常用的词会在读各种文章的过程中出现，反复记忆就记住了。
我基本上是安lz中文翻译了一下，有些地方或许有错，见谅。lz写日记一定要注意英语的句子结构，还有时态一定是过去时。中文简练，英文严谨，不要写成中国式英语。具体的内容还是要lz多读文章把握。下面是一个日记范文链接
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15th,May I went over Lesson 3 and Lesson 4。Then lerned Lesson 5 and Lesson 6。I finished Lesson 5 and Lesson 6 in NCE Study Guide。
Unfortunately I didn't finish Lesson 5 and Lesson 6 in Workbook。 17th May I recited the new words of Lesson 9 and Lesson 10 today。
I'm very sleepy after I inqired about the route to Yunnan in the evening,so I went to bed early。It's a pity I just spent little time learning today。
请注意日记英语时态要用过去式！。
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