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2017-07-10 16:00:58

•   　　真题一： 
  　　When choosing a place for living, which factor is the most important one for you? Living in an area not expensive, living close to relatives, living in an area with many shops and restaurants。
     
  　　解析：这是个“三选一”的题目，笔者认为从第一个因素出发更好写，具体的思路如下：
  　　理由一：住在离亲戚近的地方不是我选择住房地址最重要的因素，因为这样做的目的无外乎是为了促进家人间的关系，但是这完全可以通过通讯设备实现。
  　　Living close to relatives is not an important factor for me to choose a place for living, because we can keep in touch with our family members by cell phones and the Internet。
     As we know, the purpose of choosing to live close to relatives is to promote the relationship between family members, which can be well achieved by diverse and convenient devices of communication。
    
  　　理由二：同样地，住在有很多商店、饭店的地方也不是我选择住房地址最重要的因素，因为这样做的目的无外乎是为了生活的便利，但是发达的公共交通完全能够让我们短时间内就能到达这些场所。而且，一般有商店和饭店的地方都比较吵闹，这不利于我们休息。
  　　Likewise, living in an area with many shops and restaurants is also not a crucial element in the process of choosing an apartment, since the well developed public transportation makes us have easy access to any shopping malls in a short time。
     What’s more, shops and restaurants are usually located in bustling downtown and the noise does harm to our rest。
  　　理由三：事实上，我选住址最重要的一个因素是价格，因为房价低可以降低生活成本和压力。
    同时能把省出来的钱财投入到培养自己的兴趣上。
  　　Actually, the most important factor for choosing a living place is the price of the apartment, in that living in an inexpensive area can tremendously cut down the living cost and thus relieve our daily pressure。
     (+具体事例) Meanwhile, the budget saved from accommodation can be put into the cultivation of personal interest。(+具体事例)
  　　真题二： 
  　　Some students prefer to have their final grades determined by numerous small assignments, whereas others prefer to have their final grades determined by only a few large assignments。
     Which do you prefer and why。 
  　　解析：这是个“二选一”的题目，笔者认为从“小作业”出发更好写，具体的思路如下：
  　　理由一：“小作业”对老师好，因为老师可以及时监督和检查学生的学习情况，从而及时调整讲解的内容来保证授课质量。
    
  　　Firstly, it’s beneficial for teachers that students’ final grades are measured by various small assignments, because teachers can take advantage of those tasks to supervise and check students’ study better。
     As a result, teachers can efficiently modify what they teach according to students’ performance, thus ensuring the quality of classes。
    
  　　理由二：“小作业”对学生好，因为这可以迫使学生及时复习，从而让其养成良好的学习习惯。这有利于其更好的掌握知识。
  　　Secondly, having students’ final grades determined by many small tasks can also bring great benefits to students’ behaviors, since a full schedule of exams can force students to review what they have learned in time。
     And the fact is that good learning habits can contribute to a better grasp of knowledge。
  　　结尾段：虽然“大作业”可以提供充足的时间，并且压力小，但是和“小作业”的好处没法比。
    
  　　Admittedly, determining students’ academic performance with only several large assignments can offer them enough time to prepare and thus reduce their stress。
     However, when compared with these explanations and details I just provided to support my position, this statement looks particularly lackluster。
     Consequently, I am still convinced that 重申主题 + 总结分论点。
  　　真题三： 
  　　The most important things people learn are from their families。
     
  　　解析：题目中含有绝对词“most”，理论上不同意更好写。笔者认为可以先让步，再转折，具体的思路如下：
  　　让步：确实，从家人可以学到一些重要的东西，比如说一些重要的品质和良好的生活习惯。
  　　Admittedly, we can learn many important things from our families, like some good qualities and habits。
    (+具体事例：从家庭可以学到诚实这一品质和良好的卫生习惯，而这些品质和习惯可以在工作、生活上帮助到我们)
  　　转折：但是，从学校也可以学到很多对人们很重要的知识，比如说基础知识和专业知识。
  　　However, we can also learn lots of important knowledge from schools, like basic and professional knowledge。
    (+具体事例：从学校可以学会算数，这可以让我们针对每日的收支进行记录;也可以从学校学会外语，这可以让我们和老外交朋友，也可以了解国外文化，以及当外语老师谋生)
  　　结尾段：综上所述，不同意题目。实际上，在学校学的东西比在家里学的东西更重要，因为在学校学的都是实用的能力和技能，这些东西有助于我们发展事业和养家。
    
  　　Judging from the above evidence offered, I can hardly agree that the most important things people learn are from their families。
     In fact, I believe that what we acquire from schools is more important than that from families, in that school education can provide us with more practical abilities and skills。
     And all these important things play a crucial role in our careers which help to support our families。

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