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题目:Gena had worn glasses for fifteen years.She decided to get contact lenses. She would be able to see better.She would look more glamorous.(改为 long sentence) 
教材答案:After she had worn glasses for fifteen years,Gena decided to get contact lenses,with which she would be able to see better and would look more glamorous. 
我的答案:Gena had worn glasses for fifteen years,so she decided to get contact lenses ,with the result she would be able to see better and would look more glamorous. 
想请教我的改法可以吗?

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  • 2008-06-20 16:04:12
    你的改法从语法上讲没什么问题,但没有答案好,原因如下:
    Gena had worn glasses for fifteen years.She decided to get contact lenses. 
    前面一句用的是过去完成时,后面是过去时,表明时间上存在先后关系,答案上用after体现了这层意思。而你用so不能说错,但仔细考虑的话,两句话之间并没有明显的因果关系,难道戴了十五年眼镜后就一定要换隐形眼镜?
    后面的with the result也许加个that更好吧,不加应该也不要紧。意思是一样的,你跟答案只是讲的方式不同而已。

    y***

    2008-06-20 16:04:12

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    2008-06-20 10:16:34
  • 可以改写成:Gena had worn glasses for fifteen years,so she decided to get contact lenses ,as a result, she would be able to see better and would look more glamorous.

    w***

    2008-06-20 10:16:34

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