修改英语小短文
英语初学者，作文水平极差，想通提高英语写作能力。下有小短文一篇，望有意者，能抽出一点点时间，小小的修改一下，不胜感激。 I have resigned .This reasons for this are as follows.Firstly,This job spent so much more time that I have no time to do other things .Secondly,I were not interested in this tired job.Last and most ,More you did , less you harvested.
Ihaveresigned(myjob).如果加上宾语的话会使句子比较容易理解.Thereasonsforthisare ,(I)spent(so)muchtimedoingthisjobsothatIhadnotimetodoothertings.注意:主语不是工作,否则就变成工作花了多少时间了,可以用so来表示强调.Secondly,Iwasnotinterestedinthis(tiring)job.(Lastbutnotleast,)(the)moreyoudid,(the)lessyouharvested.I后面的be动词应为was,而不是were.修饰job的形容词用tiring,修饰人时才用tired,如I' e+比较级...the+比较级而不是直接用比较级.Lastbutnotleast是惯用的连接词,可以考虑使用.
what a terrible article!
Ihaveresigned.Thereasonsforitare ,ThejobspentmuchtimesothatIhadnotimetodootherthings.Secondly,Iwerenotinterestedinthistiredjob.Lastandmost,Moreyoudid,lessyouharvested.
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