总体说还是不错的。有几处的词语关系不够清晰，应作适当调整。如下：
The Senior's University of Hubei Province lies near the East Lcke。It occupies an area of 40 mu, with a swimming pool,tennis courts, underground parking, as well as table tennis room, and so on。
  It also has top multifunctional facilities, with green tree shade and cool, fragrant flowers everywhere in it。 There are 150 classes ,with over 5000 students here, and the elderly people here can not only enjoy happiness but also gain knowledge。
   Everyone says here is the last paradise of life,because it brings them happiness and a fulfilled life。Here we seem to be much younger。
   We wish more friends to come here and may everyone live a happy and healthy life of the elderly!
我的校园
湖北省老年大学位于东Lcke附近，占地面积40亩，不仅拥有乒乓球室，还配有游泳池、网球场、地下停车场等等。
  她还配备了高档综合设施，院内处处是花香与树荫，给人清凉的感觉。院校有150个教学班，5000多学员；这里的老年学员，不但享受着幸福，而且还获得了知识。每个人都说，这里是生命终端的沃土（乐园），因为她既带来了幸福也是生活丰富多彩。在这里，我们似乎年轻了许多。
  我们希望朋友们能够来到这里，并祝愿每一个人都能度过一个幸福健康的晚年！。