一篇英语日记,急!!!
health is happiness At present,many people try to lose weight even if they are thin. I don"t know why.Just as a result of they want to be more beautiful. We have more important things to do but lose weight.Such as learn and work in the world.I"m sure that people will come to life one day. Also,everybody liketo be a beautiful person.But before do everything we should think after think. 各位仁兄帮帮忙啊!请指出不足:包括语法,用词等》最好帮我纠正错误啊!
as a result of 后面只能跟名词或动名词,而绝不能是一个句子,类似的象because 和because of;Such as learn and work 中Such as 后应用-ing形式;beautiful我感觉这个词用的范围有点狭窄,要是作为男士们也减肥的,就有些不妥了,最后你的意思应该是三思而后行吧,可以用短语来代替Think thrice before acting .仅为个人意见,如有不对,请指教
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