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Dear *** I’d like to inform you that Joe has confirmed the current English training contract termination. Joe's company will follow our termination clause which is indicated on our contract. According to the clause 1.13 & 1-14, the contract will terminate fourteen (14) days after acknowledgement of receipt by UIY(company's name) of this notice from NNJ(company'sname). Joe has read and acknowledged the notice of termination on 29 Sept. The training will end in two weeks as of September 12 In addition, I’d like to get your approval for UIY‘s first payment. Per our contract, we should pay UIY for first payment which amount RMB 8888 The remaining classes should be invoiced after the Sep 12th. Please see Joe’s confirmation below. Alice Best Regards
修改的保证版本(原版本很地道,只是有几个小不妥和标点遗漏）： Dear *** I’d like to inform you that Joe has confirmed the current English training contract termination。
Joe's company will follow our termination clause which is indicated on our contract。 According to the clause 1。13 & 1-14, the contract will terminate fourteen (14) days after acknowledgement of receipt by UIY(company's name) of this notice from NNJ(company'sname)。
Joe has read and acknowledged the notice of termination on 29 Sept。 The training will end in two weeks as of September 12。
In addition, I’d like to get your approval for UIY‘s first payment。 Per our contract, we should pay UIY for first payment which amounts to RMB 8888。
The remaining classes should be invoiced after Sep 12th。 Please see Joe’s confirmation below。 Alice Best Regards Welcome to e代风流 网际游侠's super-cool blog: 博客代码特效 。
我改了挺多的,尤其是通知UIY终止培训的时间,根据上下文内容我认为应该是8月29日,而不是你英文中的sept。 29吧? 8月29日先通知他们公司,过14天后9月12日培训正式终止才对啊? Dear *** I’d like to inform you that Joe from UIY has confirmed the termination of the current English training contract。
UIY will follow our termination clause which is stipulated in our contract。 According to the clause 1。13 & 1。14, the contract will be terminated fourteen (14) days after acknowledgement of UIY’s receipt of this notice from NNJ(company'sname)。
Joe has read and acknowledged the notice of termination on August。 29。 The training will end in two weeks as of September 12 In addition, I’d like to get your approval for the first payment to UIY。
Per our contract, we should make the first payment to them which amounts to RMB 8888 The remaining amount should be invoiced after Sep 12。
Please see Joe’s confirmation below。 Best Regards Alice 。
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