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Thursday , Aug . 31th
Today was a fine day !
Tomorrow will be go to school . I was very excited . Becauese I'm going to be a grade 2 student . And I'm going to learn more knowladges . I like English very much , and write the articles . In the grade 1 , my math achievement don't very well , so I will be learn it hard . I want my math achievement will be good ! I hoped I will be excellent . I thought , I must map out the curricula , that can make me study well . Come on !



8月31日,星期四
今天天气不错!明天就要去上学。我感到非常兴奋。因为我将成为一个初二的学生了。我也将学到更多的知识。我非常喜欢英语,还有我也喜欢写作。在初一的时候,我的数学成绩并不是很好,所以我将要努力学习数学。我想我的数学成绩一定会有所进步的!我希望我会更加优秀!我想,我应该制订好学习计划,那样就能让我的学习更好啦!加油吧!

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  • 2006-08-31 15:42:10
      初二犯这么多错不应该吧。。。
    改好的文章如下:(有问题再说)
    Thursday , Aug 。 31th
    Today was a fine day !
    I would go to school tomorrow。 I was very excited 。
       Because I was going to be a grade 2 student 。 And I was going to learn more knowladge 。 I like English very much , and also like writing the articles 。
       In grade 1 , my achievement in math wasn't very well , so I would be learning it hard 。 I wanted my achievement in math to be bigger ! I hoped I would be excellent 。
       I thought , I must map out the curricula , that can make me study well 。 Come on !。

    m***

    2006-08-31 15:42:10

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    2006-08-31 16:51:50
  •   Thursday , Aug 。 31th
    Today was a fine day !
    Tomorrow i will  go to school 。 I was very excited 。 Becauese I'm going to be a grade 2 student 。
       And I'm going to learn more knowladge 。 I like English very much , and wrote the articles 。 In the grade 1 , my math achievement didn't very well , so I will be learn it harder 。
       I want my math achievement to be good ! I hope I will be excellent 。 I thought , I must map out the curricula , which can make me study well 。
       Come on ! 。

    手***

    2006-08-31 16:51:50

  • 2006-08-31 15:57:41
  •   Thursday , Aug 。 31th
    Today is  fine!
    Tomorrow I will  go to school 。 I was very excited 。 Becauese I'm going to be a grade 2 student 。
       And I'm going to learn more knowladge 。 I like English very much , and like to write articles 。 On grade 1 , I didn't do well in maths study, so I intend to work hard to improve it 。
       I 'm confident that I will be an excellent student 。 I think that I should carefully make a plan for this term's study, which will helpme study well 。
       Come on !仅做参考! 。

    瓶***

    2006-08-31 15:57:41

  • 2006-08-31 15:49:06
  •   Thursday , Aug 。 31th
    Today was a fine day !Tomorrow I will  go to school 。 I was very excited 。 Becauese I'm going to be a grade 2 student 。
       And I'm going to learn more knowladge(不可数)。 I like English very much , and I like to write articles 。 When I was in grade 1 , my math isn't very well , so I will learn it harder 。
       I want to get good grade in Grde 2! I hoped I will be excellent 。 I thought , I must map out the curricula , that can make me study well 。
       Come on ! 。

    J***

    2006-08-31 15:49:06

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