托福写作动词形式不正确有哪些情况?
托福写作动词形式不正确有哪些情况?
1、Original: So take all the above factors into account,I may not quite agree with the opinion that parents are our best teaches。
Revised:So,taking all of the above factors into account,I do not agree with the opinion that parents are our best teachers。
本段开头的so take all… 本应该是伴随状语成分,但作者直接用了动词原形,这是错误的,应该和主句的主语I保持逻辑一致,是作者把以上的因素考虑在内的。除此以外,原句中作者为能明确表明自己的立场,把may not quite agree改为do not agree。
2、Original:We can enjoy the art of cuisine in cooking rather than tolerating the time-consuming preparation。 Revised: We can enjoy the art of cooking rather than simply tolerate the time-consuming preparation。
rather than的前后用此应保持一致,此处rather than后的用词要与其前面的动词原形enjoy保持一致,故将tolerating改为tolerate。原句中还有一个用此问题,cuisine本意为“烹饪”,与in cooking冲突,故只保留一个cooking即可。
3、Original:Drink water with hygiene will certainly benefit the local folks a lot。 Revised:Drinking clean water will certainly benefit the local population。
原句动名词作主语,将drink该为drinking。原句中还有词汇表达问题:干净的水用clean water表达恰当,不用water with hygiene。 4、Original:The rapid development of science and technology has lead to an increasing need for more relaxation in off-work time。
Revised:The rapid development of modern economies has led to an increasing need for more relaxation in off-work time。
原句中lead在现在完成时中应该用过去分词,应该为led。 5、Original:CCTV 10 is such a channel intended to teach people。。。 Revised:CCTV 10 is a channe that teaches people。
。。 原句中的intend不应用过去分词的形式。 6、Original:They keep focused on money while friends and families slip away。 Revised:They keep focusing on money while friends and families slip away。
focus(聚焦、集中于)此处应该用动名词形式,keep doing“一直做某事”,keep focusing on。
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