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Food is very important.Everybody need to eat well if he or she wants have a strong body.Our minds also need a kind of food.This kind of food is knowledge.When we are very young,and we begin to get konwledge.Young chilgren like watch and listening. Colour pictures often interest in them.while children are older,he enjoy reading.When something interests them,they love asking for questions.our minds,as our bodies,always need the best food.If you study,you'll get most konwledge.
Food is very important。Everybody need(needs) to eat well if he or she wants(to) have a strong body。Our minds also need a kind of food。
This kind of food is knowledge。When we are very young,and(去掉and) we begin to get konwledge。Young chilgren like watch(watching) and listening。
Colour pictures often interest in(去掉in) them。while children are older,he(they) enjoy reading。When something interests them,they love asking for(去掉for) questions。
our(Our) minds,as our bodies,always need the best food。If you study,you'll get most konwledge(knowledge)。 。
Food is very important。Everybody need(改为needs) to eat well if he or she wants(加to) have a strong body。Our minds also need a kind of food。
This kind of food is knowledge。When we are very young,and(去掉and) we begin to get konwledge。Young chilgren like watch(watching) and listening。
Colour pictures often interest in(去掉in) them。while(改为As) children are(改为get) older,he(改为they) enjoy reading。When something interests them,they love asking for(去掉for) questions。
our(首字母改为大写Our) minds,as(改为like) our bodies,always need the best food。If you(改为we,与前面的Our呼应) study,you'll(改为we'll) get most(改为much) konwledge。
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