请帮我修改一篇英语文章？谢谢！
Dear uncle and brother,
How are you?new year was comed,did you watch the Spring Fesrival Party on CCTV?
Now i'm in hoilday ,in this year I will tast for senior middle school,I think the year is important for me ,so In this year I will study harder.
Uncle,I hope your work more successful and happy erery day in this year!
Brother,I hope you can healthy!
Happy New Year !
Dear uncle and brother, 建议将brother改成cousin，我觉得你应该指的是表哥或表弟对吗？英语里只有亲兄弟采用brother（当然，称兄道弟时除外） (How are you?)一般英语信件开头不像汉语，不用“你好” new year was comed,did you watch the Spring Fesrival Party on CCTV? 建议改成, the CNY has just passed, 。
。。。。"party"改成"evening" ，"on"用"at" Now i'm in hoilday ,in this year I will tast for senior middle school,I think the year is important for me ,so In this year I will study harder。
改成"i'm in holiday now and will prepare for the entry exam for high school when next term begins。
I think this year is important for me and I will study harder" Uncle,I hope your work more successful and happy erery day in this year! 改成"wish uncle a more successful and happier year" Brother,I hope you can healthy! 改成"wish brother good health" 英语的祝福比较简单，一般用"wish + sb + 吉利话" Happy New Year ! 建议加上"best regards （换行）yours love （换行）XXX（你的名字）" 供你参考。
new year was comed===========a new year has come Now i'm in hoilday ===============now i'm on holiday, in this year===============this year I will tast for senior middle school===================I will prepare for the entrance exam of the senior middle school I think the year is important for me ===============this year is important for me 另外就是你的結束祝福語很奇怪，至少我??信的?r候都不?@麽用詞。
你可以考?]?Q成??我稽c的句子。可以??蔚恼f一句 happy new year就足?蛄恕Ａ硗庾⒁?釉~?r?B??題。
Dearunclea ?Nowi'minhoilday.InthisyearIwilltakepartinentranceexaminationofseniormiddleschool.Ithinktheyearisimportantforme,soInthisyearIwillstudyharder.Uncle,Iwishyouasuccessfulworkandhappyererydayinthisyear!Brother,Isincerelywishyouhealthy!HappyNewYear!
wyearwascomed应改为newyearhascome,此处应是现在完成时,另外come的过去式和过去分词分别为came和 isyearIwilltastforseniormiddleschool.这里的tast应改为test,或说成takeanexam.3.Ihopeyourworkmoresuccessful.hope不可以这么用,应改为wish.4.Brother,Ihopeyoucanhealthy!healthy是形容词,在它前边应加一个be.我就改出了这些,还望大家指点
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