这样说对吗
You are welcome to come to Y, Y Lai is the business of the boot for 10 years, he was x enterprise's high-end fashion stores to promote the idea of the key positions; he is the first province to launch the display of art furniture store, and I believe we can see He felt the buzz, fashion and art performance of the furniture store. I am glad that today's guests came to the Y, please enjoy it, I wish you all a good night, thank you! 有语法错误吗？ 请指正！ 谢谢
正确简洁的说法应该如下： welcome to Y, Y Lai act as the business boot about 10 years, it was x enterprise's high-end fashion stores to promote the idea of the key positions; and it is the first province to launch the display of furniture art store, and I believe you can see the buzz, fashion and art performance of the furniture store。
I am happy that you came to the Y, please enjoy it, I wish you all have a good night, thank you! 。
关键不是语法问题，用词和语序才是两种语言互相理解的障碍，有没有中文版的，给你翻译下
Y Lai is the business of the boot for 10 years,这一句是不是应该用完成时态即Y Lai has been the business of the boot for 10 years.因为for +一段时间常用于完成时态
感觉应该没有大问题 你说出来的 即便有点小错误也 没关系的 书面的话 还要推敲 最后一句 I wish you all a good night 应该为 I wish you all have a good night
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