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写信投诉在超市受伤 Dear Sir or Madam, I am Zhang San, one of your customers. I am writting to let you know the accident happened to me in your supermarket on April 16. On April 16, 2006, I entered your supermarket to buy something for my parents. Since I wanted to buy some tomato jams, so I stopped at the shelf and tried to fetch one of the tomato jam can. Just at that time, I was hit by a large fish can falled off from the top of the shelf. The hit had caused an injure on my back and it took me 3 week to recover. Until now, I can still feel pain on my back. I think that's something that should not have happened in your supermarket and it does can be avoided by not placing heavy goods on the top of the shelves. I hope you may consider my suggest and improve your shopping environment, preventing such kind of accident from happening again. Thanks! Best Regards, Zhang San
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Zhang San。I have a complaint about the accident happened to me in your supermarket last year。
OnApril16,2006,Iwenttoyoursupermarketandboughtsomethingformyparents。IwashitbyalargefishcanfallenofffromthetopoftheshelfwhenIwastakingatomatojamcanattheshelf。
Thehitcausedaninjureonmybackandittookme3weektorecover, wIstillfeelsomepainonmyback。 I think that the accident could have been avoided if you hadn't placed heavy goods on the top of the shelves。
I hope you consider my suggestion and improve your shopping environment, preventing such kind of accident from happening again。
Thanks! Best Regards, Zhang San 居然没有要求赔偿,是你的本意吗?如果需要,我可以加进去。
Dear Sir or Madam I’m one of your customers named ZhangSan。 I feel obliged to keep you informed of what happened in your supermarket on April 16。
It was on April 16。2006 that I went into your supermarket to purchase some tomato jams for my parents。 When I was standing at the shelf to reach a can, I was unexpectedly hit by a large fish can fallen off shelf top。
I was badly hurt that it took me three week to recover from the injury, even today, I still feel subtle pains on my back 。
It do can be avoided if not having placed so many heavy goods on the top of the shelves。 I sincerely hope you consider my advise and improve your shopping environment。
We customers are willing to see such miserable accidents never happen again in your supermarket。 Best Regards, Zhang San 几个地方想告诉楼主一下,像一楼所说的,类似投诉型文章需要提一下赔偿的事情,或者要店主提出道歉或赔偿协议。
还有fall off这个词本身off就有from的意思,所以不需要再在后面加上一个from来表明从哪里掉下来之意。 希望我的解答另你满意 。
To whom it may concern, I am Zhang San, one of your customers。 Now I have to lodge a complaint about the accident happened to me in your supermarket on April 16,2006。
That day, I was heavily hit by a large fish can fallen off from the top of the shelf, when I tried to fetch one of the tomato jam can。
And the hit caused a serious injure on my back which took me 3 week to recover。 Even now, still I can feel painful on my back。
I sincerely hope such thing will never happen again in your supermarket by avoiding laying heavy goods on improper places of the shelves。
And it will be nice for everyone in the supermarket if my suggestion is accepted by you and improves the shopping environment there without such kind of accident any more。
Thanks! Best Regards, Zhang San 。
DearSi ,andmynameisZhangSan。IamwritingtotellyoumyanunhappyexperienceduringmyshoppinginyoursupermarketonApril16,2006。Thatday,Iwentyourmarkettobuysomethingformyparents。
Istoppedattheshelfonwhichcannedtomatojamswereplaced,whenItriedtofetchoneofcans,abigfishcanfallenofffromthetopofshelfandhitme, dtillnow,mybackstillispainful。
Ithinkthiskindofaccidentwouldnothappenandalsocouldbeavoidedbyplacingheavygoodsonlowershelf,hopingmypersonalsuggestioncouldbeanyofhelpinimprovingshoppingenviromentandmanagementinyourmarket。
BestRegards,ZhangSan。
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